The lead and the Dr. Smith have been jawing for two nights now. I need an easier way to show the motives and mindsets. Even the lead's jokes are too dark.
Andre: "So you are going to teach me the errors of my way?"
Steven: "This isn't Outward Bound. You're here to die."
I was hoping shorter stints would give me more control. But then control isn't the issue.
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